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  1. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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    Hey I was looking for opinion on my music anyone got any comments?
    If you got a myspace feel free to add me

    www.myspace.com/coreyfunt

    Besides recording quality I'm just lookign if you guys dig the songs or not
    and yes that its the same vocalist on the river just a lower range with the pitch played with.

    http://www.reverbnation.com/coreyfunt (This has all my newer songs)
     
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  2. graciano1337

    graciano1337 Milk Bar

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    I like 'em. I'm a sucker for the simple mix of acoustic guitars and vocals. I like what you did with The River. It made it sound a lot more like Springsteen. You definitely got some talent.
     
  3. skavenger216

    skavenger216 Familiar Face

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    Sounds good!!!! Really good Springsteen cover.
     
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  4. notto

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    I dig it man, you have a great voice for what you do. You play with other people, or just a solo thing?

    To clarify, I can tell that you're playing solo on your recordings, but do you have plans to form a band, or are you going to stay with the solo acoustic act?
     
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  5. Dr_Slump

    Dr_Slump Intrepid Member

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    I'd say it's nice so far. =)
     
  6. sabre470

    sabre470 Site Supporter 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014 & 2015

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    Lots of reverb, it actually create a good vibe, this is it mate this is your sound!!!

    Keep on the good work!!!

    What are you recording with BTW?
     
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  7. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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    Thanks guys
    I put up a brand new song.
    http://www.reverbnation.com/coreyfunt

    Called The Electrons Sing
    Would love to hear what you guys think of the new stuff

    Electrons sing has no reverb or any effects so I was wondering how it sounds.
    Someone else told me the songs had too much reverb. So I was wondering if acoustic is my style

    To record I use a lecture recorder that I also use to record lectures.
    Also I made them downloadable at the new site.
    Glad to hear people are digging it.
     
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  8. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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    for those wondering about the song "electrons sing". Then the out of place feeling of the words is intentional. Someone else said it was "a bit wordy". But, doesn't the crazy wording make it almost science like. I think it adds quirkiness.

    I got a new song up as well called
    "Down to Mexico"

    Its meant for a girl and boy. So I'm gonna eventually record it that way
    http://www.reverbnation.com/coreyfunt


    I added a Wah Wah effect to make the voice clearer


    Here's the lyrics so you guys know how it'd work

    Man: Things aren’t quite are oh so beautiful like Jupiter and mars
    I cast my doubtful eyes on you we look up at the stars
    Heaven only thinks about work this time of year
    But, I think about the bravery, and love my poor dear
    But, I think about the bravery, and love my poor dear

    Man: I must go, I must go , down to mexico
    Leave you here stranded all on your own
    I’m a man understand
    that I must make pay
    So I go, So I go, down
    Down to Mexico

    Woman: Oh darling oh dear, I can’t see anything but the dark Nighttimes
    Where I’m alone missing your touch, your starry gaze
    I’m the desert when you’re the ocean
    I’m the Night and you’re the day
    How will our love stay together if you go away away


    Please don’t go , Please don’t go down to mexico
    Leave me here stranded all on my own
    Leave the cupboard bare
    I can take it I swear
    But, don’t go, don’t go down
    Down to Mexico


    Man:And Cactuses are full of water, I’ll be safe
    Protect our daughter
    Tell her to love her father,
    He may have left her here
    But, he will try to make it up some day
    When he makes that pay


    Woman: Babe you’re sweet and I care about your soul
    I care about the love that we’ve had at home
    With our baby the family grows
    I want what’s best for her you know
    Money can’t buy love my dear
    Your needed at home, so don’t steer clear
    Don’t leave me alone, Don’t leave me alone

    Women: Please don’t go , Please don’t go down to mexico
    Leave me here stranded all on my own
    Leave the cupboard bare
    I can take it I swear
    But, don’t go, don’t go down
    Down to Mexico

    Man: I must go
    Woman: No don’t go
    Man: Down to Mexico
    Woman: Don’t leave me here stranded all on my own
    Man: Babe understand, that we will one day own this land
    But, only if I go, go away away

    Man: I must go, I must go , down to mexico
    Leave you here stranded all on your own
    I’m a man understand
    that I must make pay
    So I go, So I go, down
    Down to Mexico


    Man: oh oh woh oh oh
    Woman: Oh oh Woh oh oh
    Man: oh oh woh oh oh
    Woman: oh oh woh oh
     
  9. Twimfy

    Twimfy Site Supporter 2015

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    I like the new track, and all the rest.
     
  10. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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    Put up another new song. Kinda a simplistic one. But let me know if any one likes it. It's gonna be another boy-girl song.

    http://www.reverbnation.com/coreyfunt

    "Every Little Thing Goes Round And Round"


    Man: Jane how old are you now
    We’re travelling this road again
    We’ve been together for so long
    Can we make that secret ingredient stay

    Woman: Darling oh dear I know your concerned
    But, love is more than ingredients in a pie
    You won’t catch me in the rye
    Because I want to stand by your side
    And love you always and forever


    Man: But, if everything goes round and round
    I think about the love we’ve found
    I just want what’s in your heart to stay

    Ya everything goes round and round
    I think about the love we’ve found
    I just want what’s in your heart to stay

    Woman: Oh remember you’re the one I love
    And there’s nothing that’ll ever change that
    Because when I look at you it makes me feel brand new
    Moving me and lifting me upwards

    Man: I don’t know what to do because I’m love in with you
    And every little thing is right today
    I just want to find a way to keep our love all the same
    Don’t grow up, Don’t grow old babe

    Woman: Believe me I know, that everything goes round and round
    I know about the love we’ve found
    We can keep what’s in our hearts the same

    Ya I know, that everything goes round and round
    I know about the love we’ve found
    We can keep what’s in our hearts the same


    Man: Babe I get it,
    We’re not gonna regret it
    The love we hold is too strong and true
    We’ll be happy at least for now
    holding each other with love we’re bound
    But, I want you forever and always

    Woman:
    All the little things mean so much
    Don’t forget that lose your touch
    Open the doors send me flowers on Valentine’s Day
    Chocolate hearts and bubble bath
    Romantic evenings where we’d laugh
    Those are the little things I cherish

    Man: But, if everything goes round and round
    I think about the love we’ve found
    I just want what’s in your heart to stay

    Ya everything goes round and round
    I think about the love we’ve found
    I just want what’s in your heart to stay

    Woman:
    Just cherish the love we’ve found
    It’s not lost its just been found
    In our hearts this love can stay

    Just cherish the love we’ve found
    It’s not lost its just been found
    In our hearts this love can stay
     
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  11. Aypok

    Aypok Spirited Member

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    I've listened to a few of your songs so far and am liking them. Good stuff, dude.
     
  12. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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  13. Nitrosoxide

    Nitrosoxide Resolute Member

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    Anyways if you really believe in my music you can always help me on my way to record a full album. I know my songwriting has potential but I need to work with professionals and make the sound professional. If anyone believe in me $10 gets you a copy of my album when it gets released and a portion of the album sales %.

    http://www.sellaband.com/coreyfunt/

    Please check it out.

    if you have any recommendations on what my 3 songs should be if there's better ones I could put there let me know

    I also have a new song up called "You're a beautiful girl"
     
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